Open Poetry #27 |
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Nervous |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow ![]() |
Nervous, my heart leaves my chest to speak.. It says - "You, compliment me.. Without you, I'm nothing. You add to what is already complete." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was wondering if you meant to use the word "complement" instead of "compliment". Changing the i to an e puts a whole different spit on the poem. Warm hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I liked it. Good job I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
You hit home with that one! ![]() |
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