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Open Poetry #27

Nervous

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-25 10:53 AM

Nervous,
my heart leaves my chest to speak..
It says -

"You,
compliment me..

Without you,
I'm nothing.

You add to what is already complete."

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-06-25 11:12 AM

I was wondering if you meant to use the word "complement" instead of "compliment".
Changing the i to an e puts a whole different spit on the poem.

Warm hugs,
EA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-25 12:45 PM

good stuff

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-06-25 01:25 PM

I liked it. Good job

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

4 posted 2003-06-26 12:24 PM

You hit home with that one!

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