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lonely were a thesis
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lonely were a thesis |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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lonely were a thesis of bones and stretched connections a carcass-sized selection of a hundred thousand lines who’d read this thesis, the sis? spitting hiss after sputter false hopes? (not your mother) false starts? (not your father) who would even bother? not your packed-bag professor (a prim de la prim obsessor ) not your spouse inside the house not your friend upon the mend not your hat not your cat not even your welcome mat they’d spill their divining essence and wait ‘til christmas. Presents a thesis that made no sound full of furry sig: defy nothing the title of this the thesis: lonely and in pisces… [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-24-2003 11:17 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I do like this! you express your words very well - keep writing and I'll keep reading  Bravo Bello ! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Roniece thank you |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
WOW, Vintage you! Where have you been big guy? I for one have missed your style. Fun write but I'm betting it wasn't a cheap education.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a hurtin Dr Suess Unique up on us peace WoW |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
But if you graduate.. Isn't it all worthwhile, walty??... Seems you've been busy, eh?..  |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I write out of a need to give vent to the thoughts within my mind.To have others enjoy my thoughts is a bonus.Thanks again for introducing me to this site.Good to see you are writing again. paladin |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Durn near spurted coffee on my screen when I read Brian's comment... he nailed it, just as you did Walt... quit being a visiting stranger and treat us some more!! |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
the sis, Christmas presents, lonely and in pisces, not your mudder, dr. seuss among others are vraiment cool. i like it. salut! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
heheh thank you all.... soon as I can breathe from schooling I will try to write more... thanks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Good to see you, Walt~  You are always an interesting read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
HeeHeeHee Oh, why ask why? Well now, if even your Prof isn't going to read it . . . who's going to rubber stamp ya? You know, there is one thing worse. The library copy disappears later and no one notices. Oh, the humiliation . . . But the experience . . . ? s.a.g. p.s. Oh ya, you'll make so much more money with that thing hanging out of your back pocket. Right ! But hey, I'm not bitter or anything . . . |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
The spouse HAS read it and likes it  |
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