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Almost, But Not Yet |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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My body aches, the time is near the day is coming , another year with company to help keep pace if I can only make it... face the loneliness that comes without some one to share, my look in doubt that even if and when they come it won't console the feelings numb that rise when wish of candles, blow bring memories I use to know... "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't worry, you'll make it...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
My friend, each new day shall bring Opportunity to sing A song of love sweet in tune For love you meet very soon OK, not the best verse (my verse)..but I was trying throw a little optimism your way. He is out there, I feel it. And lonliness will be a forgotten memory. Well done! Hugs to you Prophetess Patricia (LOL) [This message has been edited by Patricia (06-25-2003 07:37 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
There is a light which glows in the window of your soul...taking you by the hand and leading you to another day, saying to you...go, enjoy, live life to the fullest...without thoughts of loss, but more so gains from the losses, fully expressed smiling on your heart...memories are our life's dreams come true...preparing us for our future. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly expressed. Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks all, I am just thinking how little has changed in this year, as I become one year older. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I know...birthdays...(spit, hack, vomit)..but you never know what the new year will bring....I was pleasently surprised this last year...Good luck and HAPPY BIRTHDAY WOMAN!! Susan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I would love to be presently surprised Susan, but it won't happen. It's better to never expect, I guess, then I will never be disappointed. *I am a slow learner* Thank you for the birthday wishes...tomorrow is the day. hugs M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You're not just one year older, you are one year wiser and one year stronger! May tomorrow be a new beginning for you! Happy Birthday, Maureen! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
happy bd M...things will get better i promise...h |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's gotta get better ey? can't get much worse  |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
Another intense and good poem. Looking back, your writing has inproved in the past year. Focus on improvement in all things. Happy Birthday. David |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Happy Birthday, Maureen! I hope all of your wishes come true. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I'm feeling ya over here! I just turned 30 on 6-21, and I cried for two days!! HaHa |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Linda, I hope so Thank you  M Helen, better is good enough for me. At least I wasn't alone on this birthday. Thank you Dixie huggin' you M David, thank you for your kind words. It is nice toknow I can put a face on them.  Sue, I made no wishes. This way I can't be disappointed  timothysangel1973 so young you are Try being over 50 Thank you hugs M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, sorry that I'm so late... Happy Birthday ...belated one Heart hugs to you, sweet lady   Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - if I were only near PA... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, you may be far from friends by distance but you are never far from friends in affection. HuGS dear one Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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