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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2003-06-24 04:28 PM



Father Time

Another year comes and goes
Must everything ebb and flow?
My mirror is getting wrinkles
My Loreal doesn’t last as long
(must have changed the formula)

Allergies where none used to be
Food just isn’t the same
And alcohol makes me sick
Got to have my 8 hours
Sleep is far more important to me

Drivers are driving faster now
More recklessly
People are far more disrespectful
Men don’t jump like they used to
And clothes are being made smaller..

I have no clue what is going on
But it needs to stop
Before I lose my mind
Before I beat the hell
Out of father time


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1 posted 2003-06-24 04:30 PM


lol.. go kick butt girl..maybe he'll leave me alone then...

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2 posted 2003-06-24 04:47 PM


Cute write Susan!
I feel the same way every year around my birthday!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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3 posted 2003-06-24 04:52 PM


---and THAT's the TRUTH!--and it's ugly!

Loved the poem!--Hate the truth of it! LOL

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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4 posted 2003-06-24 05:13 PM


I love this. As good as ever!
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5 posted 2003-06-24 08:25 PM


love it..especially the first verse because I can really relate..Happy Birthday again, Susan.

hugs
M

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-06-25 08:52 AM


Thank you for the birthday wishes!  Actually it was a good birthday...father time isn't going to get me without a fight!

[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (06-25-2003 11:26 AM).]

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7 posted 2009-03-23 02:47 PM


This is a cutie keeper


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