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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-24 03:21 PM


I'll Pretend That You're Mine

I've come to realize that
you don't really have
any time for me unless
I have some money for you.
So I'll just place you
in the category of services
provided and call you when
I'm in need of a kiss or two.
I'll write you off as
an entertainment expense.
I'll buy some of your time.
And everytime you come around
I'll pretend that you're mine.

JamesLee
June24
2003



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-06-24 03:24 PM


wheewww, Jim, hope this is made up and not true...how could someone only want you for money?????  God...how awful!  This is a good write, but if true, you deserve much much better.  But you know something, I've done the same thing.  Smiles and hugs.
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2 posted 2003-06-24 03:30 PM


James, I agree with Lee...if this is true, you are too nice of a guy to be treated this way.
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-06-24 03:35 PM


James,

I know how you feel...hugs

Laura

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-06-24 03:44 PM


Thank you LeeJ, Ethel and Paris Grl for the nice response.
I have no illusions about how nice I am...not saying I'm not nice...not saying I don't try with all my heart to make the right choices...many times a persons heart takes them where they want to go...or where they have opportunites. They arrive in situations not totally by accident...do I want to stay there?  Or should I say how long do I wish to remain...my goal still remains the same...to find a woman that values my heart and not my money...ha..ha...what money..James  

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5 posted 2003-06-26 01:00 AM




(big hugggssssssss) God, I can't understand why some peoiple can be so gluttonous, so avarice! (sad sigh) She certainly doesn't deserve you and she will certainly be unhappy as she tries to find the luxury she desires! (sigh) This is very touching, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

SEA
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6 posted 2003-06-26 01:02 AM


awww.... this is so darn sad......makes me want to give you big big hugs....
timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-06-26 01:03 AM


  "I'll write you off as
an entertainment expense."
That one hit my funny bone.  I loved the poem, but that one line made me think bout something someone said to me once.......
I'm having a personal moment.....

Enjoyed!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2003-06-26 01:17 AM


JamesMichael: you write very well - I like your style Bello - you deserve much better - keep smiling - Ciao Bello Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2003-06-26 01:33 AM


ouch! kick 'er to da curb!
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-05-28 05:14 PM


Thank you Noah, Sea, timothy, Roniece and passing shadows....
I believe she kicked me to the curb...James

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