Open Poetry #27 |
Essense of You |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Moment of completeness spiritual oneness, lives in significance indicating an intimacy beyond human comparison where our eyes meet, mystically, beyond so vivid seems as if we've been publishing a biography we merge in the light of nature depth of seas an anthology of true soul, learning to play cellos where beauty choreogrpahs time in memories past, present and future adorations Nuturing a pregnancy beyond..embreyo of universal compassion Death cannot destrory or consume that eternal flame of our song it preserves, outnumbers and floats fresh, free and alive fluent blood of earthened meaning radiant passions saturated...miracles convening shaping even...filmy tears upon flesh climbing mountains together bequeather with children's feet chisel and share a most ardent life of love never ending, over flowing leaving me breathless in a smooth softened glow By Lee J. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Death cannot destrory or consume that eternal flame of our song it preserves, outnumbers and floats fresh, free and alive fluent blood of earthened meaning radiant passions saturated...miracles convening shaping even...filmy tears upon flesh climbing mountains together bequeather with children's feet chisel and share a most ardent life of love never ending, over flowing leaving me breathless in a smooth softened glow This is absolutely beautiful, Lee. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love the part about the cellos...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When I read this poem, I got the distinct impression that you are in love--correction, in LOVE!!!---and you expressed it divinely! Warm hugs, EA |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i remember this feeling. wonderfully expressed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohhh Myyyy!! ...*Sigh*... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This one speaks from ones heart!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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