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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Crawling around naked in someone else’s mind can be risky but enlightening, rewarding, passionately stimulating. You should try it sometime. But beware... there could be land mines and hidden agendas as well as golden treasures or sweetest honeydew to wade through. And when you are ready to depart? Be prepared to leave behind a part of your heart. Crawling around naked in someone else’s mind can be risky. Are you a Braveheart? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Not a Braveheart.....will a Foolheart do? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yep!  Intriguing write, Dear Sun of Mid of Nite! Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at that reply. You're probably closer to the right name.  thanks Edand Linda, glad you enjoyed this one [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-24-2003 12:55 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling).... ok..I enjoyed the poem and understand the meaning... I just couldn't get over the visual of someone crawling around naked in my head and finding all those broken things to cut their hands and knees on....... nice write... and I did enjoy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
just keep kneepads on  thanks for reading, Ron |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
heh heh...much enjoyed the images this brought to mind Kacy!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YES!! I've often said that certain minds here would be a wonder to walk barefoot in... so much to learn... we can always roll naked in the poetry... Im not afraid of paper cuts COOL write poetess Kacy.  All I can feel is this distance between you and me. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks Nancy and JM hehe, we are all brave hearts, aren't we? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The heart, has always been the bravest part. As far as crawling naked in me pumpkin? One could find it most disconcerting, I know that I certainly do! (It's all icky and squishy and you never know when a bunch of bric-a-brac is gonna fall on you, trapping you in the mired memories(?)of times gone wrong and leaving you there grasping at any old fragment of some broken dream in hopes of finding enough purchase to just get back to your knees, perhaps enabling you to get a glimpse of the exit...and....Uh, what was the question?) Oh, yeah...Love this, Kacy Ed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, was there a question??? thanks wranx, glad that you enjoyed this write, even if it's a bit bizarre |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Midnite...there is a risk to opening any door... both someone elses and your own. Enjoyed this! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
speaking of braveness and nakedness it would take a braveheart to see me naked..grins |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You can only imagine the images that came to the frontal lobes of my mind. Yeah, they did... This is great...thanx! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martie, yes, the doorway can be scary, but we are adventurous, right? Raph, LOL, I doubt that. But perhaps that visual image should be sent privately to my email?  Magnus, LOL, well, are you just going to tease, or will you describe those visuals? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I tried that! Found a camel haired bikini! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL! I knew I lost that thing somewhere in the dark!   |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
..found some interesting messages here, especially the camel haired bikini! wow! Anyway, I'm a braveheart...bring it on! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kahlil, lol, have you ever tried to ride a camel? Glad you enjoyed this write of madness. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup! I'm bitin' my lip, hard. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nope...you are not leaving yet! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
hahaha, this was especially fun to read with this flu bug fever that is making my head dizzy. Visuals! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Some of Life's pleasures are worth risking .... ... by the way, your cupboards are far from being bare! Thanks for the dreams I know I will be having!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Kind of reminds me of Atticus Finch in "To Kill A Mockingbird", with the advice he offers "Sometimes you've got to crawl into another persons skin and walk around in it!". (sigh) I think only this method is going to help us understand each other better, but unfortunately many cowards only judge the book by its cover and read the gossip like the cover of a People magazine! (sad sigh) So to do this would be a noble task, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Hmmmm, hafta think on that one a while. HaHa Great write! Tima Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nope! Right now, I am not a braveheart at all. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the reading of the mind! ~ ARCTIC WIND |
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