navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Comedy + Tragedy = Life
Open Poetry #27
Post A Reply Post New Topic Comedy + Tragedy = Life Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-06-24 12:23 PM



I laughed
because I felt it was
      True

   and then I realized
I had just made
canals
for water to run
      through

© Copyright 2003 brian sites - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
1 posted 2003-06-24 12:25 PM


laughter and tears...some pair ..eh? nice

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-24-2003 12:25 AM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-06-24 12:28 PM


damn me boyo, short simple but powerful..we likes it we likes it yesss
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2003-06-24 12:33 PM




serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-06-24 12:34 PM


The Janus Face...

you write of it from inside out.


vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2003-06-24 12:38 PM



Very cool, Brian...love this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-06-24 01:30 AM


a trademark of insanity . . .
no lol I am kidding
"the good kind of insanity"
I love this
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2003-06-24 04:08 AM


awesome!
KoKo
Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
8 posted 2003-06-24 07:53 AM


Very, very powerful. This is wonderful

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

9 posted 2003-06-24 08:31 AM


short and to the point...i like it
Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
10 posted 2003-06-24 09:02 AM


Nice Brian, I enjoyed.

Jason

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
11 posted 2003-06-24 09:06 AM



So tell me Brian...
just how far
are the holes dug
when you pull out
such as this?


brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
12 posted 2003-06-24 02:40 PM


thank you everyone

and
Kari?
I ain't sure...
but it problably couldn't float
a whine cork

thank you

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
13 posted 2008-08-13 04:55 PM


A emotion-Filled Write here Brian !


ARCTIC WIND

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
14 posted 2008-08-13 09:47 PM


Thanks to AW...

to bobble this one up to the surface,
so I can ask the q again...



Bri, we miss you!


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Comedy + Tragedy = Life

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary