Two Loves.....One Heart (Part III) (Duet with Magnus)

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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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0 posted 2003-06-23 03:46 PM

His plan, a thought of table round
of killing deeds in scything blow.
And from the courtly jester found
the treachery of they, his foes.

            She pled and bled her heart's renown
            To promise him, though sore remorse
            Her father, King, and gilded crown
            She'd remain true on his own course

For in the night a courier
would slip the gate to waiting boat.
And from the lips this harbinger
would plot their deaths upon the moat.

            A stranger came into their midst
            Swearing alliance with one shield
            And treated all with Love's great kiss
            Not one would guess he might repeal

As gold did bring the cloak of greed
and jewels did fall into those hands.
A king was told, of her, his seed
her wanted lips, another's plans.

            For in King's truth, he seemed God-sent
            This messenger appeared so kind
            But truth be known he was hell-bent,
            To destroy two realms with one mind.

Unknown to them, from lofty perch
three archers took a deadly bead.
The quarry found in frantic search
now slain before the plotted deed.

            The fairer maid she heard heart’s cry
            Though silence filled her own cold room
            And darkness came to her green eyes
            With grief grasping chill in the gloom

While glancing blow upon the shield
of what was aimed for treachery.
A cry to heed, ‘twas then revealed
a king lay wounded mortally.

            And who knows fear of one’s dead soul
            For treason’s call shan’t gain love’s heart
            Two realms now lost, no more the goal
            While plans of men swift fall apart

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-06-23 04:05 PM

Oh My Gosh...can this be the end...let it not be so...such eternal love must outlive life itself and beat forever as one heart....I am crying...This writing between such talents as both of you has touch my inner heart and brought tears that flow endlessly.....How ABSOLUTLE INCREDIBLE!!!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
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2 posted 2003-06-23 04:43 PM

enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-06-23 04:53 PM

Okay you two..you can't leave it like this!!
Please..please...another...and soon!!
You two are amazing together.
~Hugging you both real tight~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-06-23 05:51 PM

Encore! Encore! We must have another performance of pens entertwining--er, I mean, entertaining! Perchance Part IV looms in the mist?

Love & Light,
EA

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-06-23 05:54 PM

ok... so now you two have written in the tragedy... but the bard would not leave it there nor would those who wove stories of old before...

nice work you two... enjoying this tale.

Martie

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6 posted 2003-06-23 05:59 PM

Wonderful work, you two!! I am amazed!

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-06-23 06:08 PM

And now I am looking for Part IV. Oh, I guess I shouldn't be that way...I remember what is was like to do a series. I will just keep my eyes glued for it, OK? No pressure.

Just remarkable...two amazing minds and pens.

Patricia

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2003-06-23 10:01 PM

Lady, this little venture has been very
pleasurable. You write exceptionally well
and add measurably to a poem, a topic we
both have enjoyed.

Thank You

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-06-24 03:34 AM

Ok this is just not right
No fair
reminds me of the movies
you see and when it ends you go:
whatttttttt . . . wait . . .
nooooooooooooooo
awesome amazing and quite incredible
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

10 posted 2003-06-24 03:36 AM

wondering how you two do it...brilliant!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2008-08-12 10:41 PM

Ouuu! I sure do like this one!-- Excellent Write you two

ARCTIC WIND

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2008-08-13 09:45 PM

Yes, we remember these well...

thank you, AW, for bringing up glimpses of our
best times....

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