Open Poetry #27 |
Chrysalis |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I no longer cast a shadow but wear mine wrapped as chrysalis Embraced by the darkness of thoughts that lay in depths of spirit There is as much risk in hiding from them as in confronting them From within grows the strange sense of excitement that only danger produces To conquer them or allow them to conquer me the ultimate reality I no longer cast a shadow but wear mine wrapped as chrysalis What will break through? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your fun soul, but only if you play in the midnightsun this summer in Alaska. in July, you really have to work at being in the dark. meanwhile, I'm going to loan you my magic flashlight [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-24-2003 12:24 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
As you might have guessed, I've been thinking on just this thing. I started out just thinking threes oh. The holy trinity Ego, super, and the id worm cocooned to be what IS... :squeeze; very deft, intelligent writing. and yanno doncha? It's the hard shell of the cocoon that gives chrysalis a bad name. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Kacy better'n the faulty bic i've been carrying Yeah K, i'm not sure if you mentioned the word or i was just thinking it would be something youd say or wrote so thanks for the inspiration m'lady. And thanks for the compliment means alot to me to hear..hugs and nite |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Embraced by the darkness of thoughts that lay in depths of spirit There is as much risk in hiding from them as in confronting them" don't I know it! loved this Raph! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks SEA ..hugs and g'nite to all |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Embraced by the darkness of thoughts that lay in depths of spirit There is as much risk in hiding from them as in confronting them From within grows the strange sense of excitement that only danger produces Uh-huh...this is true..... Hugs and goodnight to you, too Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful and insightful Raph as always To conquer them or allow them to conquer me the ultimate reality indeed and a scary thought at that I love this one truly . . . a beauty in itself xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have fear I know truth I realize I have no other way *shrugging shoulders* dunno where that came from but it came |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I no longer cast a shadow but wear mine wrapped as chrysalis as he faced the sun he cast no shadow....oasis.-reminded me of that. classic raphael this is, with all too many truths. |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
what they said. Good stuf man. Solemn. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
why for you always break my heart raphey!? *sigh* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
What will break through, indeed. I like this: "Embraced by the darkness of thoughts that lay in depths of spirit" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed the Write like the others, I also agree with Ethel, ARCTIC WIND |
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