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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-23 09:22 AM

You

named
my heart

~infinite~

recognition
of my open door
to your supposed
change

when did
your

~appreciation~

escape
the rainbow
you said
filled your room

~careless~

is the kicking
of sandcastles
once more

childish fate
leans

~opposite~

to where
you stand

much too old
in the eyes

of my
infinite
heart.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-06-23 09:45 AM

To think that I almost let this little "gem" slip by me this morning! Love it I do. hugs, Chris

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-06-23 09:56 AM

As dixie said....a Gem.

And yes, it's hard to know the "when" of these things.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-06-23 10:12 AM

is the kicking
of sandcastles
once more

Loved these the most Gem, sums it up nicely..work to build something and then..blah people..accck

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-23 11:45 AM

Gem - I just had my share of kicking down sandcastles myself . . .
xxoo

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-06-23 12:10 PM

ah..nicely done ..

I enjoyed.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-06-23 12:28 PM

Dear gem, he was absolutely right when he said that your heart is "infinite"!--and your infinite heart has wise eyes!

Linda

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

7 posted 2003-06-23 12:50 PM

Gem a nice write...

a diamond of a piece.

Thank you.

Goldenrose.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-06-23 04:17 PM

Oh wow...I loved this one!
Eric

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

9 posted 2003-06-23 04:19 PM

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2003-06-23 06:09 PM

Great write dear Gem!
Love it.
Margherita

Ishmael
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 51

11 posted 2003-06-23 08:24 PM

I liked this much

Ish

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2003-06-23 08:30 PM

It's hard to picture you having this particular problem, but I guess nobody's immune....I've certainly been a participant, on both sides, I'm ashamed to admit....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2003-06-24 05:20 AM

hehehe...wranx got dixie on the brain...lol

an easy mix-up Chris, we do sorta look alike? Well, we both pretty anyhow

oh yeah, the poem...nice one here gemma gal

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

14 posted 2003-06-24 07:06 AM

Thanks you guys. For reading, for understanding, for offering support.

some people just change i suppose.

lol@dixie, i noticed that too. he he.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

15 posted 2003-06-24 08:29 AM

Yikss! I've just gotten so used to Dixie being the first to respond to people...lol

Sorry Chris (and Gemma)

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

16 posted 2008-08-13 01:52 PM

Beautiful Poetic Piece Gem!

ARCTIC WIND

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