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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-24 12:04 PM


Alone
in her little corner
waiting for some light to shine in
waiting for her life to make sense
she sits in a fetal position
waiting for love
waiting for someone to open her heart
and make it bleed
so she knows shes still alive
shes waiting
waiting for that one moment
where her soul crys out in pure joy
shes waiting.....

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-06-24 12:18 PM


Maybe it would be better to get up out of the corner and go for a walk in the sunshine and fresh air?
Hope things brighten up for you, Chelsea. Keep trying new poetry styles, and have some fun in all the different forums at Pips.
Welcome to poetry land.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-24 04:39 AM


don't wait too long sweetheart...get up and go find it if it doesn't come soon
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-08-12 10:48 PM


And one day she will feel true happiness!


ARCTIC WIND

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