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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
Hate me Make me spill The last of emotions I have Laid out for your amusement Break me I've had my fill You took my mind And shattered it apart Does this make you happy? Hope so Everytime I look I'm in reminder Every place we've been Every laugh we shared A broken part of me Every cry that's shed From inside of me Just another time I think about you It's breaking down inside Every time i think Every moment Out of place and Forgotten Every second A shattered breath Pulls me underneathe The clouds that are around And show me to the place Where time is what can heal The distant parts inside And make me feel again |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow....super charged with emotions! great write!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God - I felt this one bite me! Nice write xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! powerful words! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Emotion filled Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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