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Missed Opportunity |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
She was the type of woman I could give my all So who cares that I don’t have any game Hello, my name is Cozean… no pressure intended But I couldn’t leave without hearing the way you say your name She smiled and said..naw I could never make you understand You’d never understand how my world stopped the first time she said her name. The 1st time she said her name it was like no one else was there. Actually the room was full of people, I just didn’t care. The first time she said her name I knew she had special qualities I knew in an instance she was the type of woman that could have all of me. I gave her all I had until mentally my mind was blown then the bartender brought her drink she turned and was gone. Damn… I never did get a chance to ask What is your name! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
doncha hate when that happens! loved this tho, so real and stuff  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
Ceinwyn Thanx for the LUV |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good write |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
passing shadows Thank you [This message has been edited by papabear (06-24-2003 11:43 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good Write Bear  ARCTIC WIND |
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