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Thoughts On Life |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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well this isnt really one about love its just thoughts that go through my mind i guess well anyway i hope you enjoy reading it. ____________________________________________________ Thoughts they travel afar, to places beyond the skies, And Places deep down inside, To dreams The dreams I hold inside Wishing… Wishing that life was happy and long Instand of the path to what I belong The path of the hurt and wounded The one that leads to Sorrow and hurt The dreams tell my tales Tales of love I wish belonged to me Tales of things I wish I could become Tales of happiness I long to holds in my hands Like seeds it drains away thought the gaps Slowly losing that what I once held Hoping it would land in the emptiness inside And grow into the paths of tomorrow So many paths inside tangled in the web of life As the paths ive walked fade from sight Another’s grow in the places I have yet to tread Spreading out on paths of future life’s to be told My thoughts travel back to my mind Telling me I have yet to find The answers to the questions of life But one thing I know… The paths I walk lead to my own little doom. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
The dreams I hold inside Wishing… Wishing that life was happy and long Instand of the path to what I belong The path of the hurt and wounded The one that leads to Sorrow and hurt The dreams tell my tales Tales of love I wish belonged to me Tales of things I wish I could become Tales of happiness I long to holds in my hands I enjoyed reading it...and you have described my heart through these lines! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate well |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dang Lee . . . had me happy till the end there awesome write btw xxoo |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Hey that was really good! I enjoyed it. I sent you an email. It explaines why I took so long to reply. Email me back ok? *Allison* |
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