Open Poetry #27 |
Grenadine |
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
In my heart, no picture could capture the essence.. The weather behind my eyes, raining black mascara tween my lips, which close over cherries as I sip on diet coke and grenadine. My world unravels, and wraps itself around the base of my finger. The one I'd used to point to where it hurts the most. Effected by a fever and my lack of sense to breathe.. The bruises no one else can see, obviously, not even I could contemplate upon my own misery. Summer bugs hover as I sip on diet coke and grenadine. I missed the way you used to be.. Now all that enraptures you is anger and the need to.. Give me something to think about. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Dont know how this got to the bottom of the pile so quick... I missed the way you used to be.. Now all that enraptures you is anger and the need to.. Give me something to think about. this is very stong, and i identify with it. many personal feelings within this, that i enjoyed looking in on. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
make mine whiskey and coke but with the same lingering thoughts |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Do you really need him to give you something to think about? Love isn't supposed to hurt, tho' it often does. You certainly can create a mood with your emotive writing. You reach out and grab the reader! That takes talent! EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I missed the way you used to be". I can imagine...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
So sad...I really loved it. Susan C. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read,, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ahh I may not see these: The bruises no one else can see, obviously, but I can read them plain as day xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-01-2003 10:23 PM).] |
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