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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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~ Their world ~ Fantasies unleashed On lonely souls Seeking escape From reality As they fall on their beds They sink into dream And then Onto fantasy they ride Soon they shall find There world is not forever Like a bubble It will surely burst |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Great write! You evoked deep thoughts here. The escape into dreams and fantasy is there for everyone, but sadly it's short lived, with no healing in sight, and, as you wrote, reality sets in again. 'Twould be far easier and actually quicker to face reality and work toward positive change. Those in the escape mode seldom see this. They believe the lie that it's too difficult to work toward change. Thus, they find themselves on that proverbial merry-go-round. Very sad. 'Twas a pleasure to read your work! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all things must end...yes |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Soon they shall find There world is not forever Like a bubble It will surely burst Lee, i like this a lot. Those who keep turning away from the truth, will only face bigger heartache later on. you speak of this well. keep being real. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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