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I Swear My Breath To You (the Letter)
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I Swear My Breath To You (the Letter) |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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To My Love - To this day I have wandered never truly finding myself that is, until I found you under this tree I was captured by your beauty tortured by your lack of breath and released by your lips You have taken my breath and in return given me life My heart is now yours ... only yours For this reason I must take the tide to my Father's home in hopes to persuade him not to force my hand to another I swear my breath to you ~ ~ ~ * This is a small piece of a submission that can be found in the PROSE section here at PIP if anyone is interested in the completed story. /pip/Forum15/HTML/001836.html Thank you for your read. Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 [This message has been edited by ctowen (06-22-2003 06:32 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
awesome poem |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
^^Exactly^^  I think it's sweet! Very special. Peace.  ~*~kirah~*~"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank you for sharing this beautiful piece Craig! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful, I think I can see this as poetry myself rather than prose and am happy you shared this to us all here! (smiles) This is a treasure, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I WILL be back! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was Lovely! and romantic! |
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rapturedmist Junior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 30USA |
Aww that's sweet...I bet you had somebody special in mind when you wrote that. -RM |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Craig, keep this feeling.... For this reason I must take the tide to my Father's home in hopes to persuade him not to force my hand to another BEAUTIFUL! Hearts should never be forced, we all have choices, dont we. love this m friend. i've known this feeling, and nothing compares to being found by anothers heart. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You have taken my breath and in return given me life My heart is now yours ... only yours......................" Thats a Lovie Dovie Write there!  ARCTIC WIND |
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