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haiku- Shes a Rainbow
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haiku- Shes a Rainbow |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
rain pours at sundown colors taken from the sky becoming rainbows |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
What a lovely vision you create with so few words...I really enjoyed seeing this poem... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I think this beautiful. The colors from the sky, so true. The first line, I see double meanings and I had to think about it ....but, yes, when the sun sets there is an array of colors.... Nice, Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely! Whenever sun and rain mix ... there this incredible miracle performs. And you see your love with these colors, beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Calming, colorful...simply lovely! Warm hugs, EA |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A beautiful haiku.... I want to see more of these from you!!!! Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Very nice..now I got the Stones song in my head.. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Aenimal...you got it. Great song and thanks everyone for the kind words. Its really appreciated! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful job BB is nice to see you flying through here *now I have to go listen . . . * xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very pretty M |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
very nice I enjoy your haikus Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yeah from those first few notes on the piano..my favourite stones song next to 2000 light years from home..well and all of Exile on mainstreet [This message has been edited by Aenimal (05-03-2003 05:18 PM).] |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
wonderful! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a good vision here! A concentrate of spring I think. TD |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You've captured it so well...beautiful! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
So pretty! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
bklynboy, I too thought of the Stones song, but thought your haiku describes it so much better. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Thanks everyone for the comments. I gotta buy a bigger hat now to play golf in. I really appreciate the support! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you are doing this form of poetry well, nice haiku |
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