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bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2003-05-30 08:01 PM


Tender kisses
Stolen moments
Heartfelt embraces
Thursday morn memories

Cheating hearts
Brought together
By passion denied
From gold bands

Unrepented lovers
In secret rendezvous
With tender touches
Bring memories
On Thursday morn

Partners absorbed
By reruns galore
By conversations
Repeated many times over

The words are familiar
I heard them before
A quarter century old
A rut deep in familiarity

Rules observed
Never to change
Written in sleeping abodes
Leading to Thursday morn memories

A tender poem
An understanding friend
A lover no longer denied
Bring happiness and a smile
On Thursday morn

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QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-05-30 08:05 PM


terrifect write,,,,,

It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-05-30 08:44 PM


Cheating hearts
Brought together
By passion denied
From gold bands

sad but so often true...
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-05-31 03:58 AM


so true
Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
4 posted 2003-05-31 09:21 AM


I like what you have done here with your words.  You have indeed painted a true picture of the situation.

Patricia

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2003-05-31 09:47 AM


Yeah so true indeed...well done!
bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
6 posted 2003-06-01 09:57 PM


Thanks all for the kind comments...it only encourages me to keep the creative lamp a glow....Till next time!!!!
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-06-01 10:28 PM


BB:

this makes me feel as if this write gives you much comfort . . .

well told BB
nice job
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
8 posted 2003-06-06 12:18 PM


wednesday, wednesday....................
nice stuff, bboy

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