Open Poetry #26 |
Passioned |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Passioned ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Passioned Soft glow of you Cloaks me … embered adorn Passionate breath exhaled from you Quilts me in heated coverlet of love Joined in this moment of adore Totally consuming ……… Breathing deeply Passioned~ Giving my all Receiving in return More than received ever before You smile into my eyes with new wanting Knowing that my desire rises To meet your fulfillment Yes, once again Passioned~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sizzling with a passion that keeps on growing...I love the heat of this wonderful poem... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge How nice to see you here again. This was absolutely exquisite and brimming with love and passion. "Romance thrives on love and produces an abundance of blooms filled with passion and desire" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, gals~ Ahhhhhhhh, the romance of it all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul and bringer of the mornings song what can I say but this is utterly utterly fabulous. Its too bad of you darling one to write so well when you know I cannot write a word right now. Truly exquisite darling heart. Isn’t it a good job I love you so forgive you for being such a wonderful writer. And yes you knew I’d say that. Love and warm stuff as always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew this is hot stuff Marge.......In a very deep and love connected way it's a real flame broiler. You're a s good as ever! |
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aran Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 34 |
fantastic! The emotion is raw and unfiltered. Very enjoyable. Well done. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
AWESOME! TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooo! very hot! nicely done! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Marge, I don't know how I missed this the first time around. I sure am glad that I didn't miss it this time. Hugs, Ethel |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a wonderful word to build poetry upon, don'tcha think??.. Yep you do - You did... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Passionate and impassioned and very, VERY loving. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge T. a very romantic and warming poem of love and passion. Thanx. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...Yes, indeed you are, Passioned! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aww, Marge, this is so very beautiful! I loved this. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
...if it could only be like this always. When it is, if it is, paradise.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Passioned indeed, my friend...the heat literally rises from this... jwesley |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
you are so good |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~someday I hope to feel this way again~ M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Marge, "You smile into my eyes with new wanting" love it. SG |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I greatly appreciate each kind reply~ You all make it easy to want to continue sharing~ MarshaLove~ THANK YOU for sending Bev to dig it out of the back pages of plummet~ ETHome~ Tee-Hee ... that's what 'he' says too~ Aran~ Thank you very much. ThisDiamond~ I so appreciate you~ Dixie~ Ethel~ Me too~ Thank you~ Nan~ *smiling* at you~ Kethry~ Awwwwwwww ... thankee gal~ Magnus~ So greatly I appreciate you stopping in for a read~ MartieSis~ Awwwwwww ... you're just the nicest sis in town~ Saunni~ Thanks gal ... so good to see you~ Ed~ It IS ... isn't it ??? JWesley~ I'm glad to know you like it~ RobertB~ *smiles* from this corner~ Thank you so very much for coming in on this one and for your 'feel-good' comment !! WynterGal~ You will ... oh, you will~ VanDana~ Thank you dear~ SimplyGold~ Thank you ... my favorite part too !! *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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