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Saunni
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0 posted 2003-05-21 10:11 PM


Upon Priceless

Our destination is anywhere that loyalty will lead us
Splendid lies on the very tip of grace at last
Radiant is surely found in any shade of the heart
When upon desire we value pure present and past...

Closeness only dwells in the center of what we make it
It's the choice to acknowledge life deep within
Upon luck we've found nothing better then this reality
I choose, like the dust, to ride eternity with you on the wind...

Blessed are those who can see beyond a given moment
And, through the eyes that hold the promise of forever
Upon sacred is our knowing what to tenderly keep a hold of
Never doubting it was good fortune that brought us together...

Far more generous then the sun is what faith can lend us
It's believing in always having a place to call home
Upon free will is our direction to a well lighted path
To where any breeze that might seize proves we're not alone...

Delicate claims every day that we continually touch
Fragile are the memories we've made through the years
Upon chance is our reward for withstanding the storms
I choose to never finding a season or reason to leave here...

Ever perfect are some things and more vivid then a vision
Means more when in recognition that another day is done
Upon priceless is that God called us to be a family
So, here's to the souls he's personally chosen to be one...

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-21 10:13 PM


*Fragile are the memories we've made through the years


very good write and lines!!

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A thought from a friend is treasured

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-05-21 11:39 PM




(smiles) He truly has chosen all of us to be in His family I swear, the sad thing is some choose not to belong among all of us brothers and sisters and that is where the line is drawn! (sad sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I'm so happy you're actively posting again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

icebox
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3 posted 2003-05-22 12:04 PM


"Blessed are those who can see beyond a given moment"

Ahmen!

ecrivan
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4 posted 2003-05-22 12:19 PM


enjoyed the read


Sven
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5 posted 2003-05-22 12:34 PM


I like this one. . .an asking and a blessing. . .

great work . . .

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passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-05-22 12:55 PM


wonderful piece! I always love to read you Saunni!
Saunni
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7 posted 2003-05-22 10:20 PM


Thank you all for reading and responding. It means a lot. I don't get here often and was away for sometime. I appreciate your time and love.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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