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termite New Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 9 |
every moment gives you itself and we end up tying ourselves up in something so lenient and we tightwalk through the halls banging on the doors to get a room just close your eyes and make believe they say don't look into the dark just breathe in the smoke they say you're better off without a light just convince yourself you have one it doesn't ask us to pet it it doesn't ask us to believe it doesn't ask us to breathe but we grade the papers with the red pen paint the sky a different color deny that our shadow is our own |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this touches me very deeply, you just cannot know how deep |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is intrigueing to me.... Enjoyed!!!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
termite....every moment gives you itself This opening line...Yes! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Your writing is so novel and poignant, sweet friend, it is always worth trying to paint the sky a new color, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Thought provoking indeed. Gives the mind something to thing about. quatro |
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