Open Poetry #26 |
Time-Past Love |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
In the ancient lines of time, we are relative to time travel. Past heart echoes off a future heart. Becoming united, married in a future-past relationship. Scenes of steamboats chugging down the Connecticut River as horse-drawn carriages lumber by...a vision that steals my soul away. You, me, time, all interspersed. Our eyes meet in a quiet understanding. We are meant to be. You and I...past dreams, future hope. Destined to never repeat...only grow deeper and fuller in a timeless love. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - Our eyes meet in a quiet understanding. We are meant to be. You and I...past dreams, future hope. Destined to never repeat...only grow deeper and fuller in a timeless love. 'Quiet eyes, hearts blending into one... Two in dreams, not of the past but of future times, to hope again...growing in time when the moon leaves the night, and the day comes with the new dawn...' This verse you have written is very true, very inspiring. Had to write this... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I'm a firm believer that soul mates share an unending destiny of united love, and this poem is so very special, my friend.....what a joy to read this today! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Timeless love .....and your poem is of timeless beauty ... Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is something very special about every poem of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading. This poem has captured my imagination once again! I love the surrealness of this timeless piece of timelessness! Love & hugs, EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This rode the waves of love so beautifully. What wisdom in the eyes of the heart. TD |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a cool love poem.... I enjoyed very much!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ivy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your wonderful words do! (kiss on cheek) May the future ahead bring you a continuous supply of love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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