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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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I want to be that bubble that bounces in your bath brushing up against your legs gliding and sliding to the back and across your shoulder blades I want you to blow me into the air and watch as I float down to your skin I want to be your calgon that takes you away Even though all bubbles must break up and drain at least this soapy suds will be able to say I saw heaven before I floated away |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"Even though all bubbles must break up and drain at least this soapy suds will be able to say I saw heaven before I floated away" ============================= lol..I like  hugs, g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Well, OH MY GOODNESS, now I'm going to wonder if all my bubbles are LOOKING at me in the bathtub!  I think you just permanently scarred me!  Just kidding of course - this is beautifully romantic, and of course I'm a perv, so I found it kind of sexy and silly too! You sure have one lucky lady! Geesh, for a man to write something like this about me in the tub, I'd just squeal!  Superb and creative idea here! MORE MORE!!~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Okay, I read this again with my head OUT of the gutter, and yes, I have decided that this is sweetly romantic, and SOMEWHAT sexy, not naughty.  Wow, the more I read it, the more I like it! ** peeking under my bathroom sink to make sure I have some bubbles for later! ** ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very creative write.... Nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Your comments make me all bubbly inside LOL Thank you The response I wanted I got  |
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