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Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-04-29 09:58 AM

Gentle is the skin
that I am picturing
soft is your voice
after our kiss

smooth and slow is my hand
across your arm as we embrace
a slight wind blows your hair
and I can sense your perfume

we are silent but we speak
we are warmed by our thoughts
knowing together we can create
a living poem of love

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2003-04-29 10:01 AM

Hopeless romanticism....
Nice indeed!

The only one that can hold you back is yourself.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-04-29 01:47 PM

This is sooo romantic.....Loved it!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-04-29 03:00 PM

very romantic!

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

4 posted 2003-04-29 05:35 PM

awwwww so lovely, someone is so lucky to have you feel this way. i enjoyed this.
hugs june x

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-04-29 05:40 PM

a living poem of love

lovely
M

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-04-29 05:46 PM

Thomas, this is so beautiful. I love it,
especially this....

we are silent but we speak
we are warmed by our thoughts
knowing together we can create
a living poem of love

Hugs,

Ethel

poetSeaMaiden
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 107

7 posted 2003-04-29 10:49 PM

Oh yeah, you've got it BAD.

This is simply beautiful - your short lines are so GOOD, even I could smell her and see her there with you. WOW!! GREAT read. You say SO much in just a few lines, and I like that. BRAVO!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

8 posted 2003-04-30 11:08 AM

Love the comments keep them coming

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