Open Poetry #26 |
A reminder |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
A touch of your lips reminds me of what I miss the ache in my heart will never forget for that time is not gone but only beginning As I sit hear and write I can smell that aromatic liquor as it intoxicates me with thoughts of you just a drop of it brings me closer and your Golden hair plays in my mind as you sit in the surf a lady with no fear your words were sad but still caused me to feel love for your poems never has someone stirred these feelings the way you can I want of you and need you to say my name I am a lost man lost in a dream and you are the angel I hear sing [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (04-29-2003 09:43 AM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Dang....I like what this reminds me of!!!! Enjoyed!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thoughts of a nice write It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
*big sighs* Oh boy...yep, I've been lost in that dream a time or two myself. This is SO beautifully sad - and I LOVE the way you ended it, those last lines really complete this whole feeling. I think I'm fast becoming a fan of your work! FABULOUS! ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A beautiful release of your heart. -Patricia |
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