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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Extension of my soul unable to speak Write what I cannot scream what I cannot shout No touch is near I fear inability to be loved but love Escape above this world silence my plight I write to ignite my speech Breathe the fresh air weightless flight for I cannot help but write |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I understand this so much! I love it all... I tend to be quiet.. when I'm not being crazy that is.. and I don't know how I'd survive without writing.. it really is like a second breath. Thoroughly enjoyed! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's how I feel too Sue...good way to express this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YES. and tonight? er? this morning? I'm sitting on dynamite! I understand this all too well... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, I read this and every word came out, as if it was mine ..... so deeply I relate at the moment .... Immensely touching and beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A mirror of my own feelings in this. (as you may have surmised). This IS a beauty. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful, Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...simply beautiful. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful piece of writing melancholy this.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous but sad, sweet friend, always write out exactly how you feel as we will always be here to give you shoulders and support hugs! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
there is no sound in space you practice here for your flight nice |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
In just one word ...... "DITTO"!!!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
 write write write you are so RIGHT  Rogue |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and I am so pleased that you DO WRITE!--and extremely well at that! You have an interesting and unique way of expressing yourself and I always leave your poems changed in some way--and that denotes powerful writing! Sending you a bouguet of spring flowers, EA |
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