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The cock crows at dawn
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The cock crows at dawn |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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worship the Spring of life It pulses with the water that brings the new the swelling green of future a secret smile that sprouts from the womb of awakened earth to dance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
to dance...and run and hide from the one in pajamas with the shotgun who drank too much last night  bring the roosters indoors! really, a great write...makes me want to stay up till dawn |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I counted 32 words. And I keep trying to tell you how profound it is to me, that you are able to affect the emotion that you do, with just such a splash of word. You are amazing bri. And now I COULD go on the soapbox, about how you don't believe in YOU--but I won't. I COULD say how you are like the aesthetic artist, taking splashes of paint, effecting and affecting the canvass, convincing the eye to color blend where emotions only halfway dare to go--but I won't. I could say how you remind me a bit of a man possessed? grin? suffering, in his angst, against the weave of the canvassed backdrop, with so much more to say--but I WON'T. I could say a whole lot more, knowing, where each word hit home, in hopes that all will understand? and you KNOW I won't. I just hope, they all see it too. (and yet, somehow, I know? You won't.)  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Knowing without knowing, and yet. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would say all that Serenity said, but I won't.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Yes its always up before i am..the rooster I mean..grin nevermind. great stuff bri |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
And some secrets held dear... Sprung only when it is time....ah, spring. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri: you are quite amazing and this . . . gave me a breath of fresh air (yes, the both of you are writers) Ed and you - *sheesh* lol loved this xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I believe in me I don't believe in me I both believe and don't believe in me I neither believe nor don't believe in me there that's better  thank you all for the wonderful replies  |
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