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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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looming in the air, in which you breathe, i stare. sometimes if you dare. I could even begin to care. And I know it is you that I need, and I know that it is you I see. You know me like the wind, YOu know me like the rain, You know me better than the sun. You know me, and that is all that matters. I wish you loved me, I wish you cared. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this hurts |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
if it makes you feel any better, we've all felt like that at one time or another... you did a wonderful job portraying your feelings... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ouch.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
The raw emotion of this comes through with few words. Marilyn |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Whats really sad about this piece is that it is a lie in its entirity. The poem was written directly toward piptalk when in all reality i should have written it toward myself. Love, |
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