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Holding Clouds
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Holding Clouds |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{Then the clouds,} Night pushes back the dawn songs of angels rise like floods on brilliant wings of horizons Let us take our fill of this night when the air changes blue with dusk glittering in endless circles I look at this empty place: where once we spent nights in conversation A memory where gardenias grew vibrant life I’ve given your name to warm light inside flesh, inside velvet skin echoing your peace -- pressing through green -- I keep your jade with memory and love, {hauntingly beautiful} and stories of the sky touched again by rain  Through the darkness I can see your light And you will always shine And I can feel your heart in mine I will remember you [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-29-2003 12:25 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"{hauntingly beautiful}" Really, not much more to say. Uh, where have you been? You got me reading you....then pfffft! Glad to see this! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There you are, Lauren~ Taking my breath away! Stunning, this color of jade on you! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
just so lovely .... hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - nice to see you, and this writing. Your touch is amazing... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Lauren, this is beautiful, as always your writing style blows me away. You have a true gift and I'm saving this~ Melissa~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I’ve given your name to warm light inside flesh, inside velvet skin echoing your peace -- pressing through green -- I keep your jade you always amaze me.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
L my  sister of heart, it has been way to long and your words so sorely missed...So lovely Lady, as only you can do.  (and just why isn't this checked for the book, gosh gal....it belongs there in a section of greeneyes poetry all it's own... YES I DO love it that much...) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Lauren...here you are, and look at this!! Beautiful..breathtakingly beautiful. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"I’ve given your name to warm light inside flesh, inside velvet skin echoing your peace -- pressing through green" ~ My favorite verse of the wonderfully written poem - I get a sense of nature in the form of a woman when reading this. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I believe the clouds always need to have rain one day or another for without the tears the soils of love can't grow fruitful! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I'm so happy to read your gorgeous imagety again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sighs..beautiful |
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