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One Tiny Raindrop
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One Tiny Raindrop |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*One Tiny Raindrop*~ Out beamish cloud a raindrop fell So gently, only cloud could tell And just as softly came to rest Upon the bareness of your chest Once there it paused in soft recall Of moments held in lover's thrall As sweetly as the morning dew A raindrop fell from me to you ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-28-2003 07:39 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh this poem is so softly wonderful...a tear gathered in my eye as I felt the gentleness of this single raindrop...BRAVO!!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The sweetness of a raindrop....Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sheesh! this is a refreshing POV! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh ... S'Perfect~  LOVE that title~  And is there a hidden message here ? Well, think I'll just look 'under the covers'~  Love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is just perfect. Love it. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
*chills*.... I LOVE that....very cool...  hugs, g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You've a wonderful story so tightly written, but is your teardrop one of joy or regret? Very nice to read you. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn!, Vicky A beauty |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
OH OH!! let me answer KAYJAY before I go to bed.... this is a JOYOUS TEAR!!! my heart does a happy jig on this note..... how happy I am for you my friend...I just had to read this again...I'm going to bed now... !lv,g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*smiles* hehehe Vicky you're so cute Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vlraynes - very tender you write of this raindrop... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heavenly! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite a special raindrop! Very lovely! Margherita |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is tender, beautiful, its perfect! wow, it really is! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vicky, this is just stunning work! I loved it. Hugs. |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Very beautiful indeed - you took one little moment, and made a lovely story from it... It was like time was standing still as I read it. WOW...breathtaking! ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tiny...is good... small gifts small packages holding the greatest joy... yes, my dear, tiny is extraordinary.... as is this. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Vickey, I love the concept here. And your skillful writing ability. Enjoy your poetry a great deal. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is so tender and beautiful. it melts one to read it. excellent. hugs from june x  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Vicky!! What a joy filled read! Love this..into the library with it!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Vicky you write like an angel and I always look forward to reading your poems. 'As sweetly as the morning dew A raindrop fell from me to you' Awwww! Hugs and Smiles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ya know woman... The tiny sparkle of this little beauty graced the dew of morn just right. Smiles from TD |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Vicky, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I dream ever so much to make my dream girl in the future cry in joy just as the thought of her makes me cry and the sentimental feeling always touches my heart! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, may you and your love always find precious memories to cherish forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ...I'm dancing a happy dance here too... This is wonderful, Vicky |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!! This is so wonderfully written! It's short and it's so sweet!!! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
...Just so beautiful! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What an amazing poem!! Absolutely wonderful!!! Richy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
BRAVO, love the way you write.......and I think I will keep this tiny raindrop in my library ((hugs)) Charisma |
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