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Open Poetry #26

Miss you...

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

0 posted 2003-04-28 05:56 PM

When I am with you i am whole
you complete me, filling my soul
now were apart and i feel so alone
half of me is missing, my heart is a stone

We were together for so very long
now were apart and it feels so wrong
All i can think about is being with you
I miss you truly, do you miss me to?

My life is in fragments, whole no more
my heart is torn, and so very sore
All it wants is it friend back
its stopped beating for now, until you get back

We were one, and now I'm alone
I hated god for that, down to the bone
He forgave though, his eyes agleam
he says we can see eachother, now, in our dreams

My heart and soul are bound to you
forever ill love you, forever be true
they are both yours, forever to hold
until i find you in heaven, ill never feel cold

You're here with me, and soon well be together
like the best friends we were
well soon be in heaven
together, forever.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2003-04-28 06:33 PM

This is heartwrenching and bittersweet.....
Very nice....I do enjoy your writing!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-04-28 06:56 PM

Yes it hurts to miss the closness of a relationship that we no longer enjoy...James

poetSeaMaiden
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 107

3 posted 2003-04-28 06:59 PM

*sighs* Oh yeah, boy do I know THAT feeling all too well...

You did a good job putting your heart out there on paper. GOOD JOB! Hang in there...

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

4 posted 2003-04-28 08:00 PM

I've been there. You've reached my heart.

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

5 posted 2003-04-29 03:32 PM

Thank you all... your praise means alot to me.

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