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Open Poetry #26
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Mindfire
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2003-05-04 04:07 PM


Far removed from familiar faces
Amongst the willows and wind
i find myself in unusual places
Where my mind starts to pretend

That as i sit here gazing
At the rizing moon
My mind is hazing
It won't be dawn soon

So i sit upon the cliffs edge
and gaze at the moons glow
I slowly move along the ledge
where the wind starts to blow

Slowly back to reality
where my peacful dreams drift
They vanish and leave me
And between us theres a rift
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-04 04:16 PM

dreams, fading with the night as it drifts into day
nice imagery
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-05-04 06:12 PM

Very nice!
Eric
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