Open Poetry #26 |
Bel's Fires Dance (A witches challenge) |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Barefoot on the grassy knoll around the ribbons of Maypole Dancing by the light of flame of the blessed fires Beltaine You the beautiful Mayqueen I your handsome Jack In Green Underneath the sprouting leaves In celebration of May Eve Happy birthday (of sorts)hope you like? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, me liketh oops, did you mean me? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You capture it, Raff. Going-a-Maying. Happy birthday Kacy!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ed, HAHA, mother nature's bday maybe...Kacy's is in November but I dance all year long |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Oh, that's right! It's Ratleaders' birthday! (Happy (late) Earthday then) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wonderful Raph--you really did catch the Celtic rhythms in this--and I love the way you captured the feel of a "chant"-- you guys are naturals! and yep, I'm gearing up for the day over here! Hugs, you. Thanks again for getting in the spirit of the season--it IS my favorite holiday! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everyone was a fun ittle write, not a rhyming man m'self but it wouldn't work any other way and wanted to capture that celtic essence..thanks again for reading |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
amazing write Raph - from what I have read on it - you have captured it well - as always - xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
omg raph! Im like in love *swoons* and no Im totally sober no wine yet If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Sue I'm new to the whole deal but was inspired quickly by the though of it..i love me celts Kris you make me smile i gotta say |
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