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In the Mood of Me
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In the Mood of Me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In the Mood of Me I have this heart that reaches out becomes addicted to words and then reading as if they're meant for me rebuilds a warmth inside, again. To fill the loss, these blue screen dreams have given way to dance of moods yielding to a tenderness, shadows of, past interludes. A fine respite, a pause in life, to linger in the happiness that memories can rise in smiles these many moods, we each possess. I'm mooded often, toned by you, words made up to fit my cause. And so I sway to warmth of Spring breezes tempting thoughts in pause. The dark has lifted, the want no more, no longer locked in shadow's own. I am the me, I use to be no longer searching for the unknown. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"The dark has lifted, the want no more, no longer locked in shadow's own. I am the me, I use to be no longer searching for the unknown." ~ I enjoyed reading this poem. It captivated me. This final stanza, if it means what I think it does, is an excellent beginning, Maureen.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes! thank you for this write, it rings of truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The dark has lifted, the want no more, no longer locked in shadow's own. Maureen- Amen to this! Let's embrace the light and feel our spirits lift. Well done! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Opeth, thank you for your response. I have been pondering what makes me tick lately and realized I wasn't being true to myself and that I will begin again, this time not looking for any happiness or expecting any in return, but instead enjoying each day for what it is. Then when my time comes and it is the right time, I will know it and it will bring me even more pleasure. Life shouldn't be so hard, and I was making it so. Hugs to you for always understanding. M Midnightsun and nightshade, thank you both for your kind responses. *s M |
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luvlorn322 Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 43 |
well done, i can defnately relate. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
luvlorn322, thank you *s |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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