Open Poetry #26 |
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Mermaid Love |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
~ Mermaid Love ~ Alone in the waters, she’s destined to be Forever without him - this mermaid at sea. She loves from afar, sees him there on the land He knows not of her, nor would he understand… She is beautifully strange, an angel so rare Never touched by a man, just the tides, salty air. Alone in her watery world, vast and deep She dreams of his love, both awake & asleep… Gentle waves that caress her - she pretends, his embrace She closes her eyes and imagines his face Bending slowly to kiss her, fingers run through her hair It’s a dream though, she knows he will never be there… She dreams of the chance to touch his soft lips She closes her eyes, feels his warm fingertips Tracing softly her face, her brow and her hair - If their eyes were to meet, could she speak - would she dare? A sweet sigh from her lips, as her head bows in pain Tears roll down her cheeks, like a soft salty rain. She loves from afar, she’s destined to be Forever without him - this mermaid at sea… ~ poetSeaMaiden ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
All i can say is WoW" what a touching write of poetry!! "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
PoetSeaMaiden, Oh this is certainly my favorite poem of yours now. This is so good. I love your work! Poor angel, doesn't she see how beautiful she is, how lucky anyone would be to have her? Sigh...You continue to amaze me. Mike ![]() |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...very lyrical and full of beautiful imagry! Eric |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi,have to tell you this is one of my favorite themes, and you just did it so beautifully. Thanks Sandra |
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