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There Is Fire Here
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There Is Fire Here |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
My fingers burn as they trail along the fluid lines of your lips - There is fire here. My lips ask for this burning. But my fingers say - "No...not yet...not yet." As they play slow across these holy flames. There is a time to burn. Before this...there is only a longing for the fire. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
...sizzle... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes!!! The last phrase speaks a million words all by itself!! Great write, fantastic style and I am going back for a second read! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
You see it as fire, I see it as electricity,anyway you describe it, its some inner power exuding. Loved this too!!! ~Talia |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Spectacular write! These expressions of the ecstacy and agony of longing, in a love such as this... romantic. TD |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Absolutely Brilliant I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Eric~ I love the 'romantic' of this. Beautifully done.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautifully romantic! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
The burn of desire. I love this! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very romantic. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too know this desire so well, let it light your heart but don't get burned and fondle it with loving care, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is sacredness in this desire to touch and to burn ….. do you know what impact your beautiful words have on the reader? These flames reach out far …..you stir the longing for the fire. Love, Margherita |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Hehehehhe i could px that but also the thought behind i love its good. i think its really good. Smile Dreamer |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
wow....hot! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've got a thing for fire... the simplicity of this, the almost stop and go quality of the expression just emphasized the theme of having to will one's self to slow down. Enjoyed much, and yep, there IS fire here. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ooooo!!! That's the way to say it!!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is a very hot write... Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope your fire is eternal... |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
HOT HOT HOT, this is HOT HOT HOT! *hosing you down with the nearest fire extinguisher!* Yowza, this is good, steamy! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sensually passionate....Magnificent... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
  yum |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I burn in your gentle sensuality and love... and within this beauty, I am gladly consumed. Magic. Thank you... I love you, Moca |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Oh, yes! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this Eric. Sandra |
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