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LastMoments
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-04-14 09:23 PM

The crystal moonlight throws itself
Along the stone black path
To show the way to a place
Where one feels deserved

The endless pressure holding down
Every thought, created grief
Dampened by the piercing winds
That blow beneathe my heart

Wearing the crown of disappointment
With thorns that lace the top
That puncture deep into my wounds
That live as building scars

Represent what I can't be
Time invading what makes me
As the hourglass appears half full
It just blows over to start again

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-04-14 11:09 PM

(big hugggsssssss) All it takes is to learn to fly and break like a bird against the wind to prevent that tempest from turning you again! (sigh) Let grace be your plumage, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-04-15 12:48 PM

Liked it as a whole, but this is what caught me

"Wearing the crown of disappointment
With thorns that lace the top
That puncture deep into my wounds
That live as building scars"

~wranx

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-05-12 12:08 PM

An intrigueing way to say what you said....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-05-13 01:40 PM

Yes, the stanza that Wranx pulled out is the one that caught my attention as well. Thank you for this...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-05-13 02:33 PM

I as well noted the lines that Wranx and Sunshine pointed out. Powerful and deep.
Well done. TD

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