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Ace of Spades |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Its on the deck of cards if you care to stand apart and threathen to glare at the order of things, migrations take wing as in salty sands, oysters beds sing to stand apart from the rest of the deck a real general or insignifcant fleck? pick the card and cause some change keep your composure in this sad game... game of risk..stakes go up, in a hand lay a chosen cup leaders rise to topple in their folley horses race after another volley reader,what do you say about intervention about colleced cards of introspection? would you enter a state of radical abuse surround another trophy, while crooks run loose... so political maps change their scene a trial without cause can pass as obscene in the oyster's mouth, grain are lain and pearly growth requires some pain.. the pain to remain just figures on cards from the pottery all is left is shards of the house you kept, you venerated yourself stached millions of dollars of untold wealth you are the schemer of crimes against humanity today, tomorrow and the next but until I reach insanity, I'll marvel at your ignorance over one petty detail how your legacy could ever amount to more than just a leadership on a deck of cards. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-27-2003 04:20 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very thought-provoking Martin, thanks for the lesson tonight |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martin: to stand apart from the rest of the deck a real general or insignificant fleck? pick the card and cause some change keep your composure in this sad game... nice write composure ahhh a toughie xxoo |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Guess the answer to my questions lies in how the game is played and who can keep the upper hand...thanks for reading  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Enjoyed!!!!! It got me thinking.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting write!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
These cards you write of...have disturbed me so much. The deck is often stacked...and sometimes it is hard to tell the Ace from the Jack. Smiles from TD |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
it is strange to see how leaders could land up on a deck of cards, but hen again why take this game all so seriously  |
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