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Disillusioned |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Can see this...the end of my day whatever ends becomes part of another that gets deposited somewhere deep in my department of antiquities broken occasionally by hints of sobriety whatever is so patiently laid there, somewhat reflected from mirrored surfaces by bodies that walked with talking heads and expressed how much they needed... needed to protect their identity but imposed their wills posed for flashed stills and continued their long march along lands dry and parched towards the end of their kind when that will be hard to find because libraries have been burnt and museum sanctity usurped its all part of this race rushes to keep neurotic pace would that be the rush to the moon cause here on earth there's no room until crowds push their latent weight solutions conflict at the grand debate all draped out at the end of day where every tribe wants to be heard but if one has been armed local reps then feel harm deposited somewhere turbulence causes ripples in mirrored pools leaders of the day line halls of fools conscious state lie awake... is humanity just another fake... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-18-2003 11:35 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, ecrivan, you have so many truths in your writes, it needs to be read over several times to get all the meanings. It is very good, and very thought-provoking. Thank you :heart; Hugs, Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent write and commentary |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I guess it is a run on poetic commentary of what can happen when a nation or nations get cleaned out...and this is becoming a repeated pattern. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-18-2003 11:38 AM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Good honest thoughts.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
reflections..on what's more to come |
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