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Your words, my ablution
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Your words, my ablution |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Your words, my ablution Words of Love as flowers coloring my garden within. Your words golden strings adorning me. I am the desert yearning for water. Your words the diamond drops calming my thirst. With open arms reaching into the sky, I receive you, pure words of cleansing essence. My soul’s gaze asking you to act as a soft ablution, showering me with tears of compassion. Silvery Light shining through, sparkling words enfolding me with the Beauty of YOU. Words, eternal and powerful as rocks, building a bridge from soul to soul becoming ONE. Your words my ablution, renewing my spirit, and resonating within, as the most true, sweet voice of Love and Harmony! And on my lips Your Name! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a cool refreshing tribute to love. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Loved the idea of cleansing words here. (at first I thought you had meant absolution, but it came clear for me a bit later) A very loving write. ~wranx "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* refreshingly beautiful.... I love it. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita...a spring time love song... Beautiful! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - my, my, what a beautiful love poem... BC |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I loved this part: Words, eternal and powerful as rocks, building a bridge from soul to soul becoming ONE. And on my lips Your Name! awesome write - look forward to more |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is impossible for me to pick a favorite part as this is meant to stay complete and completely beautiful. Oh, I so enjoyed this one. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Stunning as always |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH!! How beautiful!!!!!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow Margherita....this is stunning! Love, Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Margherita, this is precious, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your romantic words do, I can only imagine in my dreams my loves name sealed to my lips! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita: I am the desert yearning for water. Your words the diamond drops calming my thirst. Brilliant - as always - just leaving me smiling here xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just gorgeous! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Margherita, this was just amazing. Loved your words and the feelings it portrayed. Seems there's some real true love going on in your life. And you have to know how much I adored this picture. Hugs and Smiles. Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
 Words so true and beautiful Thomas |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my friends for taking the time to read and to comment so lovingly. Love, Margherita |
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MysticDreamer Member
since 2003-04-21
Posts 131 |
Beautifully Written. After reading I felt I knew the clear meaning of the word without ever seeing it before. Thanks for sharing this. Good Will Always, Mystic Dreamer |
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