Open Poetry #26 |
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Pizza For Dessert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Pizza For Dessert She ask me if I was hungry. I told her I desired to eat sushi. She told me that I was sushi. I said, if I'm sushi then what are you? She said she was pizza. Well, let me change that order. If you're pizza then it's pizza I desire. She said allright, then come over tomorrow night for dinner at nine. We'll be eating steak and vegetables and drinking some nice Merlot wine. What about the pizza that I desired I inquired. That's for dessert. You'll be having pizza for dessert. JamesLee April14 2003 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (04-16-2003 04:31 AM).] |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
What about the pizza that I desired I inquired. This is cute, but watch your spelling. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, this is clever. And, I'll betcha dessert comes first! Enjoyed, hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done James...very inventive write.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (giggles in delight) Oh James, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, I however would pick many things over pizza anyday, hehehe, think I'll have ceviche for dessert, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like this one. Joyce |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
So how was it?..typo on your, I think line 7 and there are so many pizza varieties ![]() |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yeow, nice work! Having fun with love -- a fine thing to do...........! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...appetizer AND dessert |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Witty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for the wonderful responses....James |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I found this clever and entertaining. |
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