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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2003-04-24 05:14 AM

On a dolphin’s back
I ride my ocean of tears
she giggles me through.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-04-24 06:44 AM

This is beautiful, and with so many different thoughts enclosed in it's simplicity!! I love it!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-04-24 06:49 AM

I think that would wash the tears away...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-04-24 06:58 AM

I know the magic
a dolphin shares...
this is beautiful, Margherita!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-04-24 08:45 AM

Margherita
On a dolphin’s back you can find a dream,
enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-04-24 08:50 AM

Mwwaaahhh! There's a great big kiss for this little piece of perfection! My dolphin helps me in the same manner!

Hugs & knowing smiles,
Linda

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-24 09:06 AM

Love this!! I also love dolpins!
Well done and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-04-24 10:35 AM

Margherita - seen many dolphins in the oceans, and they are beautiful. Nice write...

BC

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2003-04-24 10:48 AM

Dolfine piece of work
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

9 posted 2003-04-24 11:32 AM

beautiful simplicity

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-04-24 05:50 PM

(smiles) Oh Margherita, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love dolphins so much and always dream of swimming in the coral reefs with them! (kiss on cheek) This is magical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

11 posted 2010-03-21 05:40 PM

this is one my favorite poems of yours so far. this inspires me alot.

wonderful effort of imagery and words
the feeling is wonderful.

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

12 posted 2010-05-19 08:22 AM

The contrast of emotions of the protagionist and the dolphin make for a stark contrast. A vivid image.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

13 posted 2010-05-22 08:35 AM

Thank you, dear Laverne and Earl, for your most kind comments here.

Love,
Margherita

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