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In The Heart Of A Woman
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In The Heart Of A Woman |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In The Heart Of A Woman … ~*Marge Tindal*~ Though you may look deeply into her eyes you will only see what she wants you to see~ Do not expect to ‘understand’ her no matter how hard you try~ You may see her tears … but don’t ask her to explain them. They are simply a soft part of the mystic that makes her who she is~ When she has that faraway look rest assured … she hasn’t left you She’s only gone to the edge of serenity that only another woman could understand~ When she is through replenishing her soul she will return ……… and all the world will again be right ~ For in the heart of a woman there is the strength and gentility to cope with all life deals her~ Ask no questions … just hold her tenderly for a moment Your tenderness will last her for a while until the serenity-seek again calls her name~ For serenity lies in the heart of a woman waiting for her to come again ……………………………………………………………………………and she will~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...this is so beautiful, and so true. Woman are pretty special, for certain, you!  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very well written, So very true. You captured what is in every womens heart.  Julie |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is very beautiful Marge. Betty |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You may see her tears … but don’t ask her to explain them. They are simply a soft part of the mystic that makes her who she is~ From one woman to another, I know all about this place we go to gather up our peace. Thank you for warming up my heart. hugs Marge~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hard for a man to comment on this, you'd think, but it's really not so difficult. I have seen this very thing from a man's view, oh have I ever, and every word you've written here is both perfect, and true. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Ask no questions … just hold her tenderly for a moment" And he did... BIG Hugs, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
wow... this is one gorgeous poem!  well done... "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Extreemly well done...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marge: and she will~ excellent description of the wonders of us I love this! xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And sometimes life says, "Write me."  MartiSis~ I have no doubt that we share this serenity space~ Whiskey~ So nice to see you ! Thank you dear~ Betts~ Thank you so much for always showing up in the meadow of my serenity~ BluesSerenade~ Ahhhhh ... it's so nice to know that we share~ Ed~ Ahhhhhhhh .... I 'knew' you would find a piece of 'life' in this write. And ... thank you~ Men should read this one ... for it is exactly why it was written. Women know ... and men need to know~ VickyVickyVicky~ Me *smile* BIG~ Heart-hugs your way !  WingsOfTheMoon~ Thank you so much for allowing me to share with you~ JamesMichael~ Really nice to know you popped in on this one~ Thank you~ LittleWing~ Thanks so very much. I greatly appreciate knowing you enjoyed it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (04-26-2003 01:41 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Marge, So beautifully sensitive...and well written, this part of us...Ah, those meandows of serenity...I know them, too.. Thank you for this...Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Bravo, Marge...I felt wrapped in the serenity of this poem....It is perfection.... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A very beautiful, thoughtful and insightful poem. I loved it! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
hello marge, now if only men could all have a copy of this one, they might then begin to know where we are coming from. fantastic poem, hugs from june x |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is one of your absolute best. Only a woman can understand another woman. And you have captured those feelings perfectly. What a gem this is. For in the heart of a woman there is the strength and gentility to cope with all life deals her~ I love you my friend and thank God for your presence in my life. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge how beautiful said, this is a keeper for sure  ((hugs)) Charisma |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You may see her tears … but don’t ask her to explain them. For there are times she doesn't know... they just are. *S* Tender and sensitive and written with the understanding that is Marge. *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautifully written, Marge. Yep, dearest men, don't expect to see all that is within....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Regards2You~ I so appreciate the kindness of your thoughts~ StarTime~ It is peaceful to share the sisterly-serenity~ Thank you so much~ BettyLou~ You just know I thank you so much~ June~ Yes ... men should certainly know these inner feelings of a woman. Of course you could print it out and give them a copy ! I know I did !! VanDana~ Thank you, dear~ MartiMyFriend~ And that goes double-right-back-at-ya'~ Thankee, gal~ Charisma~ Such a joy for me to see you here~ Thanks, my friend~ Suthern~ *sigh* ... you 'always' understand~ I soooooooooo appreciate you~ MidniteSun~ Thank you very much for your comments~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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