Open Poetry #26 |
Twenty Five Hundred More |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Twenty Five Hundred More One has to wonder as I venture this way If there’s really anything more left to say Twice times one thousand, then half more You’d have to doubt there could be much more You’d have to think there’s been too much revealed Tales of friendships lost, and hearts long sealed From inner darkness to the stars above There’s talk of hope and home, of life and love Like the hoards that swept from the northern lands Thoughts flowed to life through this shaky hand There’s been boundaries explored few have seen But always left to wonder, if it was all just a dream And now as time flows on, the river runs dry Another dream dispelled as expectations rise And with a tear in eye, disjointed thoughts collect While I’m suspended here, deep in reflect And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have been told more than once, that if you don't have expectations then you can never be disappointed and then when something wonderful comes your way it is a pleasant surprise...for that day. what a bunch of "crap" M whoops, I just noticed the title and your number of posts...congrats? I guess... [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-25-2003 06:19 PM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
good job |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Eddie! Congrats on the 2500 posts! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah...but, my friend, remember...with the ending of each dream a sweeter and more wonderful one replaces it....**hugs** |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
And now as time flows on, the river runs dry oh i hope not !!!! i have only just begun to read all these wonderful poems and i really enjoyed this clever one. thanks hugs from june x |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Know always that the river has its dry seasons but there will come times when the river floods with rapture and you will find some dreams never wither! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Dreams are wonderful things, bad ones replace with good ones hopefully. very nice piece Julie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lots to ponder, Eddie. Glad I stumbled across this one. Congrats on 2500 posts. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
looking forward to the next 2500 |
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