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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Hasten Unravel what right do I have to want or feel in this ache of loss where every fiber of my being cringes in pain one attached to the next pulling me apart [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (04-25-2003 05:58 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I guess ache of loss does not care whether we have a right to feel it or not ... pain just comes and takes hold of us. Very well done. Love, Margherita |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I agree, we just feel, we have no real choice in it. Enjoyed your thoughts! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice piece! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly intense. Eric |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Painfully beautiful....sometimes we feel so torn apart...Perfectly said... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Being torn is a horrible feeling, Nice write  Julie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) You possess no right, pain is sadly a merciless brushfire that can consume you temporarily then disappear suddenly! (sad sigh) I send healing angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
heart felt write!! "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I too, question my own questioning. like looking in a mirror in a mirror, only YOU, laughing now. infinity. |
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