Open Poetry #26 |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk ![]() |
sharing sadness in your heart, touches me in mine, pain so tender and raw, with yours it will entwine. let me know your sorrow, that i might share with you, help to heal your aching soul, and we will see it through. let my arms protect you, caress away your tears, dress your wounds with love, nursing all your fears. sew stitches round your agony, so your heart won't tear apart, stroking bruising from your ego, where blows have made it smart. crushed and broken down like this, i surely cannot bear, i need to make you whole again, i beg you ....... let me share. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a wonderful offer of unconditional love and caring WELCOME to Passions! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thank you so much. hugs from june x |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
junemac A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
good piece |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wondeful piece, Can feel the emotion within it. Enjoyed ![]() Julie [This message has been edited by whiskey (04-25-2003 09:12 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! got my vote! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write and thoughts "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm glad I didn't miss this~ The semtiment begs to be heard~ and you've written it so well. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thank you all for your kind words. i was pretty scared of posting on here as this is the first time i have used a forum like this. you have all helped to make me feel so welcome, thanks. x june x |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
It's in time of sadness and depression that one needs a true friend by his/her side. Your friend will be most fortunate to have you with him/her, June. ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You show such a compassionate heart in this very lovely poem. May the caring and sharing be mutual. Love and welcome! Margherita ![]() |
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