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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sky Strings missing you yet, I know where you are you are in the rain threaded in its water pouring silver strings bound by fibers layered wrapping me in silence under crying sky |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
nicely written, enjoyed the flow and expression. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Beautiful write |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you could pull anyone in with these lines of yours. I'm not sure whether to jump up and down or cry... I think I'll just think. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice thoughts "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, so beautiful in its sadness |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
lovely poem and really great expression. hugs from june x |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Helen - you continue to set me in awe of how easily you write these wonderful gems. hugs to you, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Helen..very nicely done. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a warm and gentle write. Enjoyed M |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Helen, sometimes you touch me so much that I have no clever words. This is beyond beautiful in it's melancholy and images. I'm keeping this~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen...this is very lovely!! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
great wtite very good reading Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I didn't answer this the first time I read it, because it got me started, and next thing I knew I was writing a poem in response. So back again to say I really like this, and that it struck a chord. My little bit's over here: /pip/Forum79/HTML/000862.html ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 How'd I miss this?:[This message has been edited by passing shadows (05-31-2003 02:06 PM).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mice imagery, Helen.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) We truly are all children of he horizons, aren't we? (kiss on cheek) We are born to sing in the rain, pirouette in the wind, shine with the sun, so let's go fly some kites, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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