Open Poetry #26 |
The Power Of Your Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Dark clouds appeared so quickly As lightning punctuated the sky The seagulls looked for shelter Upon the clifftop way up high I found shelter from the storm Within your warm embrace So lost in love was I As I gazed up at your face In the blue and yellow boatshed We watched the waves lash the shore As we struggled to be heard Above the ocean's mighty roar We stayed safe undercover Until the clouds moved away Then the skies began to clear The sun brightening up our day The waves lapped our feet As we stood upon the shore And with the power of your love You reeled me in once more * * * "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart." I am in motion |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
You do have a way with love poems, nicely done, enjoyed muchly. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue.. "You reeled me in once more.." Love that line. Great poem..much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Suetang, isn't it eerie that we did this, about two hours apart! My poem is sad and your poem helps us recover. I think we should keep them together! Kahlil |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'I found shelter from the storm Within your warm embrace So lost in love was I As I gazed up at your face'<.b> Sue, this is about as comfy, cozy, lovey, dovey, snuggly as anyone can get. Phew! Love the picture ... Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
what a wonderful way to have your heart captured...This is Stunning... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, all the most wonderful things in the world must be felt with the heart and one can always find refuge from any storm with love, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful such a lovely piece, enjoyed this very much Julie |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderful expression of love. enjoyed. Maree |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Beautiful and tenderly told! Betty Lou Hebert |
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